Felipe Carvalho

Lovely voice, awesome, more!!

My take on this nice song, with my own little twist, let me know how it sounds.

Since I can´t play the guitar to save my life, this will have to do \m/ RIP https://app.box.com/s/uixx0of9tffyqdipds6ckkgjf4wn1ngw

Speaking as a big fan of Dio, this does not sound great at all. Take lessons!

Thank you guys @Robert Lunte Dio in this era was a monster, on Rising in special, its absurd! @aravindmadis Thank you bro, I think one of the things the track is missing is Blackmore playing, the other is Dio singing . haha but the dynamics on this track are a bit (*auto edit*) up, the guitar playing is a bit too stiff, it all sounds "harder" than it should and I ended up doing the same with the vocals. Probably a bit of delay and extra reverb could help indeed.

Someone screaming my name Come and make me, holy again!

Very nice man, reminds me a bit of Muse and 30 sec to mars. Gonna listen to it more closely next days, sounds very tasteful, full of dynamics .

Hello Ryan, I´ve listened to a few clips, Coldplay and James Blunt. There are some technical issues, but what is really getting in your way right now is rhythm and melody, you are kinda going blindfolded at the songs it seems. Listen more to these songs, pay attention to the tempo of the phrasing, notice which parts the singer uses a more "connected" sound (no pause between notes), and the more rhythimic parts (strong marking to the beat, longer pauses). Perhaps sit down on a piano or keyboard, and map the whole melody as reference. In my opinion its where you will see most improvement from what you are doing now. For these songs you might want to get a bit lighter handed, I don´t mind the more aggressive approach but most people won´t enjoy it so much.

I´ve just heard the clip and honestly I have no idea of what you are even trying to do there Sing a song, these scales, done in this manner, will do you no good.

Thank you ronws!!

Thank you my friends

Thank you bro, and sorry for not seeing your reply sooner!