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thx felipe! alrite i will try do a clean one n upload again!!! really appreciate all the feedback u guys are giving! thanks!

u got me right in the head! yup its kinda of a shortcut, easy way out. it truly is much harder to sing in my own tone. yup i'm takin vocal lessons actually! with this dude Eli Prinsen. http://www.hybridvocaltechnique.webs.com/ damn good singer n his teachings fits me the most. check him out!

rowns - wow that will be a dream come true man! thx! validar - thx dude! tried my best! florida weather eh, i can't even keep long hair here due to freakin govt service.. nick - i totally understood bro! yes i agree i liked my tone better on those phrases u mention, and YES its much easier to sing in brian johnson mode when higher up. "in line" meanin the cleaner tone or Brian tone? i would really love to sing in the clean tone thruout the whole song but i just cant get it right. im not sure its my technique or my vocals is broken! if u listen on 2.56 part of the song, u can hear me flipped between those two tones. its because of this that im constantly unhappy about my singing!! i donno if i should be happy or not actually.. confusing me very much!

thx validar! it is quite a challenging song for me. had to take a couple of takes just to get the first verse right. still mad at myself for not gettin the pitch right! argh! it seems like its always fallin halfway into another pitch... thx for pointin out bro! n im freakin jealous of ur hair. -_-

HAHAHAH! damn u spot me. yeah i was tryin to do his mumble thingy. damn his mumble sounds good. how can anyone have a good mumble. wonder if theres any vocal teacher who teaches mumbling. hahahahaha!! thx bro for the feedback! yeah i realized only after recorded it that i was off pitch at certain areas. its a cool song. im still tryin to get his raspiness...

another one of my fav! this one is a damn fun song to do but quite hard to pull off! i get tired doing this song after a few takes... pls comment n critique! https://soundcloud.com/ammarahsg/whitesnake-still-of-the-night

tryin my best to make this song sound good. coverdale's tone is amazing. i need your help in pointing out which area of my singing that i need to improve. will upload more soon! https://soundcloud.com/ammarahsg/whitesnake-here-i-go-again-2 thx for the feedback guys!

hey everyone, posted a whitesnake cover earlier but there seems to be a problem with the backing track copyrighting thingy... i don't know where to get another version... anyway i also did this audioslave number.. did my best to do justice to this song. pls critique on the areas where i can improve! https://soundcloud.com/ammarahsg/audioslave-like-a-stone-aliz thank you everyone

you're not trolling are you... :lol:

OUR SINGLE IS UP FOR DOWNLOAD! A story about someone's pain who has lost his/her loved ones.. http://ammarah-sengsara.viinyl.com/ \m/

Thank you brother! That means a lot to us! =D

Hey guys, I'm not sure if this is the right place to post this, so I apologize beforehand! Sorry! Anyway, if you're into heavy metal, or progressive rock, or some sort like that, check out my band Ammarah. http://www.ammarahsg.com/fr_home.cfm We're from Singapore, the language that I'm singing is in my native language called Malay. We're writing English songs too and we will release them when we're ready. Please visit us and give us your opinions n thoughts about everything that you see or hear! We're still new to this and would like to know what everyone is thinking about. We are open to all kind of comments as I think they are very helpful to us. And if it's not too much to ask, please like us on facebook if you like our music! =D http://www.facebook.com/AmmarahSG Thank so much guys!

thank you justin for pointing that out to me! yes i was having trouble singing the higher notes n this is really due to bad technique. now i know why! thank you so much! i guess i wasnt relaxed enough and i myself hear that i was almost straining on the high parts. (cuz after the take was done, i had trouble doing it again) i agree it was a mistake on my part on not really practicing the song before recording, but this is mainly me not knowing HOW to practice. which ultimately leads to my downfall. your post sure helps me a lot on this part. thank you justin! really appreciate it!

ah thank you brother! currently i'm in a PRO called Compass ( http://www.compass.org.sg/cIndex11.aspx ) which is based in Singapore (where I'm living right now). i'm gonna get myself in cdbaby soon. read about them and Tunecore, and decided that cdbaby is more beginner friendly so to speak. i'm still reading and understanding about the business side of music making, and there seems to be a lot of info to take in. thank you again for the very indepth reply. this is very useful to us all whos reading.

reps for u my brother. now thats an amazing critique. yes i realized there's something wrong with the harmonies after the song was done, (i was just in for my parts, wasnt there when other parts came in) and i couldnt place a finger on what was makin it sound wrong. n u explained it nicely. thank you. my friend who produced the song "when i see you cry" also said that the song was meant for me. (n he gave it to me too haha). im gonna re-record this song, but this time without backing vocals. just straight up rock vocals hahaha! also it's gonna be played by my band and we're a very progressive metal/hard rock/symphonic metal influenced band. this will be an interesting one to rearrange. agreed on "a friend like you" (or A FLY for short as my friend say) about it being a hit. found out everyone who heard this song loved it, n its also the top fav among all the 3. thank you about the info on copyrighting n stuffs. this is useful for my friend. just one thing i dont understand. u said "The last one and this one are hit songs". my friend was asking which are those two.