very good, but I think you have to improve from part 2:41, the high range part of the song.
looks like is very compressed voice and a little forced in that part.
have you tried singing thah part with more "head voice" or more relaxed ?
youtube track 5:11 seconds your track http://vocaroo.com/i/s1DHTwA6tlg7 5:11 seconds you could have cut your track to make the "fake" more real, hahahahaha