Great Canadian Bearfighter

I am curious for some thoughts, some of the feedback on this last song I have got is that it is a bit pitchy still and sounds whiney? any suggestions? Thanks

I tried some of those tricks and recorded this one, any thoughts?

Hey Draven, really appreciate that feedback. I have just been trying some of those things and it seems notes feel easier to hit actually, I am hoping it will improve the bored tone as well.

sorry I don't have it up on youtube an not sure what box.net is Here is from soundcloud though.

I have been searching for some good reviews on some original songs and vocals, interested in opinions. https://canadianbearfighter.bandcamp.com/track/found