TMV World Member Collin571 Posted August 11, 2016 TMV World Member Share Posted August 11, 2016 Cues are still a bit iffy. This was first take. Pretty proud of the direction I'm taking with my singing! Hope you guys enjoy and any constructive criticism is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrator Robert Lunte Posted August 11, 2016 Administrator Share Posted August 11, 2016 Collin, Way to go... Your Review: - Collin your singing flat. - You need to tighten up the intonation and the rhythmic cues. - I do like your energy. I can tell that your "feeling" it and are enjoying it... that is important. You simply have to tighten up intonation and rhythm. Clean this up and try again.... 2 ROBERT LUNTE Founder / Author / Coach robert@thevocaliststudio.com TheVocalistStudio Student Testimonials Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Gneetapp Posted August 11, 2016 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted August 11, 2016 13 hours ago, Collin571 said: Cues are still a bit iffy. This was first take. Pretty proud of the direction I'm taking with my singing! Hope you guys enjoy and any constructive criticism is appreciated. Hi Collin, I liked your timbre in this song. I think you should check your input levels, as you started to distort when you got louder. Also, as Rob has already pointed out, you need to improve pitch. I almost fainted imagining myself singing this song. It is so wordy that I would have a hard time trying to sing it. Good job 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Member Collin571 Posted August 12, 2016 Author TMV World Member Share Posted August 12, 2016 13 hours ago, Gneetapp said: Hi Collin, I liked your timbre in this song. I think you should check your input levels, as you started to distort when you got louder. Also, as Rob has already pointed out, you need to improve pitch. I almost fainted imagining myself singing this song. It is so wordy that I would have a hard time trying to sing it. Good job thanks Gnee! I didn't notice the pitch issues till the 2nd time listening through. You're not talking about the vocal fry right with the distortion I've been drifting in and out of vocal fry coincidentally in my singing lately. Luckily I'm going to be getting TFPOS really soon so i'll go from being a badass to being a super duper ultra badass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Gneetapp Posted August 12, 2016 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted August 12, 2016 8 hours ago, Collin571 said: thanks Gnee! I didn't notice the pitch issues till the 2nd time listening through. You're not talking about the vocal fry right with the distortion I've been drifting in and out of vocal fry coincidentally in my singing lately. Luckily I'm going to be getting TFPOS really soon so i'll go from being a badass to being a super duper ultra badass. Yeah! I can totally relate to that Collin. I always do this too. Regarding the distortion, I may be mistaken (it would not be the 1st or last time), but I don't think it is fry, cause it sounds like overloading the mic. It could be your doing fry/distortion and getting to loud and overloading the mic. Like you, I'm planning on getting TFPOS too. Cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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