This is my voice, take a listen!

[Jens]

some metal for yah

http://www.speedyshare.com/572749422.html

[Matt]

You got a whole range of skills, effects and tricks under the belt there, good job

Great sirening. You seem to be quite a lot in your head even far down in the normal chest range. Slight criticism: You were a little off key now and again when you were in your normal voice in your passagio and I was at first a little dubious of your voice until you started getting into what you really enjoy doing. So can R. Halford be, who you could probably take on in a match without feeling ashamed.

[Jens]

Thanks Matt! yeah i know that chest is not my power my chest ends on like F4 but i need to lighten it alot earlyer not to blow right into the "wall"

Yeah i could easily take on Halford in a match if it where in looks and charisma in singing Halford is a beast -.-

Many of the points i use head very low is stylistic reasons:P

Like in the stick of the song i move from a falsetto thats very low down in the range up to a mixed quality thats higherup with alot of dist. I like to play with dynamic changes like that

at what point(time) in the song was i off? Gonna try to correct such stuff :P

[Matt]

I would say the whole of your second sentence is a little iffy.

Then, "The thought of falling endlessly asleep", second verse and also the sentence afterwards, up until you get more comfortable as you ascend. Two more sentences where I cant work out the lyrics leading up to you going crazy towards the end (which you do quite eminently) sounded a bit suspicious too.

I think thats about it really.

The falsetto is a nice touch and sounds good and the hysterics at the end are quite impressive ;)

[Jens]

well thanks for the response, il see if i can get those things sorted so im more spot on

just to make sure i got this right

the second sentence in the first verse

and in the second verse...

second verse:

when im gone your there

why do these rumours come alive

well your not breaking me*(half growl)

the thought of falling endlessly in sleep <--- so im off here

falling from the darkest corners in my mind<--- and this? going from chest to mix

bridge

nothing more or nothing less waiting for my kiss of death(scream)

[Matt]

Lmao. Yeah, something like that, *imo*.

[anonimuzz]

Your screams are awesome. It's the first time I listen to you singing a full song and I'm really impressed. Congratulations for you! I like the low head voice, it's a nice touch.