I usually scream but i did an acoustic song

[joryy]

I am extremely new to SINGING. I already know its bad but i need you to tell me what to work on and such. Thank you so much,

myspace.com/safelysells

the song is called offshore

[joryy]

is anyone here?

[David]

You probably failed to receive any comments due to your link being incorrect..

The proper link: www.myspace.com/safelysell

I can hear pitch issues, and sounds closed to me. If you drop your jaw and relax your body (try standing), you would be able to put more emotion into the words which would open up the sound..

I am not a professional here, but figured I'd add something ..

Hopefully with the corrected link I just posted, you will receive better and more useful responses from the pro's at TMV.

[joryy]

You probably failed to receive any comments due to your link being incorrect..

The proper link: www.myspace.com/safelysell

I can hear pitch issues, and sounds closed to me. If you drop your jaw and relax your body (try standing), you would be able to put more emotion into the words which would open up the sound..

I am not a professional here, but figured I'd add something ..

Hopefully with the corrected link I just posted, you will receive better and more useful responses from the pro's at TMV.

thank you very much for the link fix.

And for the advice.

[kalapoka]

I am extremely new to SINGING. I already know its bad but i need you to tell me what to work on and such. Thank you so much,

myspace.com/safelysells

the song is called offshore

Hi Joryy,

I can't access myspace from work. Will it be possible to upload a clip in a file sharing network (except sendspace)?

thanks

Ashique M. Fahim