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Comfortably Numb - Pink Floyd

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That was pretty cool. Although it sounded a little eerie to me :) You changed the melody of the vocals a little bit and it gave it kind of a spooky sound. Which I found interesting...not a bad thing.

If I had to say something as a critique, I would say the English. I guess English is a second language so some of the lyrics were wrong Also some of the words were long and drawn out, which at least for me, kind of confused the sentence structure. The word "feeling" comes to mind. There was the word "is" somewhere in there also that was emphasized. I forget where it was but it was the wrong word to emphasize in a sentence.

Overall, good job

Tommy

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