TMV World Legacy Member lindydl Posted March 14, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 14, 2014 Hey guys, I need someone to listen to me singing and say what is good, and what needs improvement. Man in the mirror is an awesome song, and aside from the slightly flat notes at the end I hope I didn't butcher it too badly. Any advice is welcome, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member gilad Posted March 14, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 14, 2014 Hi Lindy, First welcome to the forum. Take my comments with a grain of salt, as I am no vocal coach or expert. I love the song Man in the mirror. I am a huge fan of Michael Jackson RIP. No, you didnt butcher the song at all. Yes, there were parts you were flat, but what I noticed mostly is that the renditions tempo was too fast. In my opinion it removes the feel... I recommend to slow it down a bit. I think you have a nice tone to your voice, and you play nicely along. Superb! Best of luck, and I would love to hear it again slower Wondering to hear what the others will say. Gilad My Original songs: A new day - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FJfozwtLCdY I can't believe - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NFMTnOVwaIY Thank you - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l8VVHp535Bw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member lindydl Posted March 17, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 17, 2014 Thank you! I have posted this same video on a few other sites, and your comment was the first one that was not rude or impolite. So thank you for that! I listened to Michael Jackson's version again, and mine is much too fast. So I'll try it again and make it slower. Thanks for your advice. And I voted for you by the way, you are a very good singer! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member gilad Posted March 17, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 17, 2014 Thanks for the vote Lindy! Why would someone leave rude or impolite comments... Weird.. I am now waiting to hear the slower rendition. I listened again, and I really do think you have potential. Catch you soon My Original songs: A new day - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FJfozwtLCdY I can't believe - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NFMTnOVwaIY Thank you - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l8VVHp535Bw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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