TMV World Legacy Member KillerKu Posted May 7, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted May 7, 2015 I like your approach on this newer one, Rob. I felt like the original had unique phrasing, but it gave me an art house kind of vibe and sounded more theatrical or acted out like a play.The phrasing and delivery on this new version brings the song into new territory and feels evolved. It sounds less theatrical or self consciously delivered, and more personal.The best I can compare the feeling, is if I'm watching a well acted, I suspend disbelief for at least for a time, that the actor 'is' the character they are playing, and also are likely going through some of the same emotions (method acting). Where as on a traditional stage play, the actor on stage will likely doing more of a performance art that also involves relaying messages to the audience. It sounds closer to the former, which I think is cool, you didn't write the song or the story, but it sounds like 'you' and very believable.I agree there are a few places that could be punched in. A couple of the throughs could use a touch up, but I'm sure you know as you touch up voice every day.This reminded me I wanted to take a shot at this at some point as well. It mostly hovers around G2 on the lower notes, which isn't too bad with some random notes out of my range. Looks like a good challenge song, and I like the idea of having an entire sub forum of songs. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrator Robert Lunte Posted May 7, 2015 Author Administrator Share Posted May 7, 2015 Thanks Kill... its not done. That was just one quick take between students... I have yet to polish really... ROBERT LUNTE Founder / Author / Coach robert@thevocaliststudio.com TheVocalistStudio Student Testimonials Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrator Robert Lunte Posted May 7, 2015 Author Administrator Share Posted May 7, 2015 Cool, thanks Ron... Anyone else want to step up and try this? ROBERT LUNTE Founder / Author / Coach robert@thevocaliststudio.com TheVocalistStudio Student Testimonials Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member aravindmadis Posted May 21, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted May 21, 2015 Here is my contribution to this thread! https://app.box.com/s/2b4e5oltpxgbd4cevjafqihmcqvxbd88 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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