Jarom Posted June 17, 2015 Share Posted June 17, 2015 http://vocaroo.com/i/s1wcFG0tUqWRI am really loving the feel of it, tell me what you think so far HEY GUESS WHAT!! you can review people's music and get paid for it AT http://www.slicethepie.com/?wyd=727083 --referral link I use the site every once in awhile and make a few bucks so I figured it wouldn't hurt to share the love and make a few bucks at the same time (Feel free to delete this part of my post if you would like. I am mainly posting about my new song im working on. If you would not like to see referral links on the forum please feel free to delete this part of my post. I am just trying to make a few bucks) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
felixp Posted June 17, 2015 Share Posted June 17, 2015 http://vocaroo.com/i/s1wcFG0tUqWRI am really loving the feel of it, tell me what you think so far HEY GUESS WHAT!! you can review people's music and get paid for it AT http://www.slicethepie.com/?wyd=727083 --referral link I use the site every once in awhile and make a few bucks so I figured it wouldn't hurt to share the love and make a few bucks at the same time (Feel free to delete this part of my post if you would like. I am mainly posting about my new song im working on. If you would not like to see referral links on the forum please feel free to delete this part of my post. I am just trying to make a few bucks) Would like to hear more of it on better audio but I dig how it sounded! Sounded eerie but a cool vibe to it. Haha I was wondering when you were going to break at the end with the belting haha. Keep up with it good job so far 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sexy Beast Posted June 17, 2015 Share Posted June 17, 2015 I like the first line, could you sing a whole song like that? The rest is way too wild and out of control... Are you actually trying to sing a song or just having fun making crazy weird noises??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jarom Posted June 18, 2015 Author Share Posted June 18, 2015 I like the first line, could you sing a whole song like that? The rest is way too wild and out of control... Are you actually trying to sing a song or just having fun making crazy weird noises???Are you referring to the end when my friend yells "I can't do it"? He yelled that because the chorus was coming up and he got scared.The rest was just girl scout giggles because were dumb. we were writing the song and wanted to see what it was sounding like so this was fresh stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sexy Beast Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 Hey Jarom in my opinion the only thing that sounds good is the 1st line. Everything else sounds like this: Obviously you got a lot of range but can you sing a simple song and sound good? If not that should be your main focus!Sorry if I'm a little hard on you... I mean well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elvis Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 What beast is saying is essentially that the high part is uncontrolled. You are just wailing on the melody. With refinement it can sound good. But now its soundsvlike your wanking your range. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MDEW Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 You and your friend are just playing around and you want a serious review? For playing around....not to bad.... it shows that you have the range.....the sound will get better in time.I could not hear well enough to know if you were on pitch. I could tell you were close enough for playing around with it.You and the song have potential..... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sexy Beast Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 What beast is sayingOh please you can call me sexy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jarom Posted June 18, 2015 Author Share Posted June 18, 2015 Obviously you got a lot of range but can you sing a simple song and sound good? If not that should be your main focus!Sorry if I'm a little hard on you... I mean well I got you mr. sexy. I can sing simple songs and sound good light or loud or gritty. I was wailing stylistically to give a certain sound. a lot of people like it a lot of people don't. But yes I can control the sound pretty well I feel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gno Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 The song sounds good - based on the small amount that you posted. Your voice is good - a bit out of control with the pitch on the high parts. It would be better if you had a more finished version without your friend freaking out about the next part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sexy Beast Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 I got you mr. sexy. I can sing simple songs and sound good light or loud or gritty.I wanna hear that. Can you post a clip? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ronws Posted June 20, 2015 Share Posted June 20, 2015 What beast is sayingOh please you can call me sexy Yeah, kinda difficult to call you sexy with that beer gut hanging out. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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