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http://vocaroo.com/i/s1wcFG0tUqWR

I am really loving the feel of it, tell me what you think so far

 

 

 

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http://vocaroo.com/i/s1wcFG0tUqWR

I am really loving the feel of it, tell me what you think so far

 

 

 

HEY GUESS WHAT!! you can review people's music and get paid for it AT http://www.slicethepie.com/?wyd=727083  --referral link  I use the site every once in awhile and make a few bucks so I figured it wouldn't hurt to share the love and make a few bucks at the same time (Feel free to delete this part of my post if you would like. I am mainly posting about my new song im working on. If you would not like to see referral links on the forum please feel free to delete this part of my post. I am just trying to make a few bucks

​Would like to hear more of it on better audio but I dig how it sounded! Sounded eerie but a cool vibe to it. Haha I was wondering when you were going to break at the end with the belting haha. Keep up with it  good job so far 

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I like the first line, could you sing a whole song like that? The rest is way too wild and out of control... Are you actually trying to sing a song or just having fun making crazy weird noises???

Are you referring to the end when my friend yells "I can't do it"? He yelled that because the chorus was coming up and he got scared.The rest was just girl scout giggles because were dumb. we were writing the song and wanted to see what it was sounding like so this was fresh stuff. 

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Hey Jarom in my opinion the only thing that sounds good is the 1st line. Everything else sounds like this:

Singing-Cats-cats-in-choir.jpg

 

Obviously you got a lot of range but can you sing a simple song and sound good? If not that should be your main focus!

Sorry if I'm a little hard on you... I mean well :)

 

 

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    You and your friend are just playing around and you want a serious review? For playing around....not to bad.... it shows that you have the range.....the sound will get better in time.

I could not hear well enough to know if you were on pitch. I could tell you were close enough for playing around with it.

You and the song have potential.....:) 

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Obviously you got a lot of range but can you sing a simple song and sound good? If not that should be your main focus!

Sorry if I'm a little hard on you... I mean well :)

 

 

I got you mr. sexy. I can sing simple songs and sound good light or loud or gritty. I was wailing stylistically to give a certain sound. a lot of people like it a lot of people don't. But yes I can control the sound pretty well I feel. 

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The song sounds good - based on the small amount that you posted.  Your voice is good - a bit out of control with the pitch on the high parts.  It would be better if you had a more finished version without your friend freaking out about the next part.

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