Apart from being amazing it sounds like you are concentrating on phonation and hitting the long notes too much at times, which is taking focus away from the emotions. Like if you are holding back a bit just to sing in a "good" manner. Not always but noticable after a long note, then you go down in pitch, and the emotion with it
Just a though but have you tried to retell the lyrics at speaking level sometime? It should really give opertunity to flex some storytelling muscles. I have to give it a try it's just a revelation I just had hehe.
Being picky here after just two listens but great tone!
