Alas, patience has never been a virtue of mine.
LOL. You have a way with words!
Thank you for the feedback, and your comments are definitely a concern for me. I recorded the vocal, but was not a participant in the mix. That was handled by a couple guitar players. Perhaps I should have insisted that I was there for the mix. Still, I wonder if the blame lies with me with respect to diction and articulation. I certainly don't want to unnaturally over-articulate, but if the listener can't understand the words, that's a problem. Do you think there are things I could do to improve the vocal in this regard, or do you really think the problem lies simply in the mix?
I think my vocals were mixed a little more prominently in the other songs we recorded in that session. If you don't mind, can you take a listen to another tune and let me know if you think the issue you identified is improved? That will go a long way to putting our finger on what can be done next time around. I really appreciate your time in listening and commenting.
The best example for comparison (a similarly-styled upbeat blues tune) is probably "A Shot of Whiskey (and a Bottle of Beer)" which can be found here: http://www.reverbnation.com/southernslangtexas/song/14927438-shot-whiskey-and-bottle-beer (click play on the last of the six songs in the list)
Your tough love is welcomed and appreciated! Hair of the Dog is the name of the song, and it's about dealing with a hangover after a hard night of drinking (though the alcohol is really just a symbol for getting over a woman). I definitely know about the Nazareth tune, though its odd that the title never actually makes an appearance in the tune (as far as I recall).
Anyway, thanks again, and I'll be interested in your thoughts on the other track if you have the time and inclination to give it a listen.