Snax, yes, I agree, that was great! I enjoyed listening it.
If I were you, and i wanted to keep improving. I will work on the lower range vibrato. At the beginning it doesn't sound so natural. This is just a constructive commentary, because i think that posting it in a singer's forum means that you are looking for feedback that helps you growing. But I want to make clear that I think you made a great job! =D
Thanks for your post!