Adonis

Cant seem to make the F#4 video come out on the op. This is the link for the second youtube clip. If it still doesnt come out I heres the clip url

Hello guys, I just really want opinions and constructive criticism on my voice. Do I suck? Too high of a timbre? Am I ok? I know its a small piece of the my voice but I just really would love to know what you guys think of my timbre. Btw the notes are "I jump in(c#4) front(g#4) of a train(F#4-F4-F#4-F4)" for the next line its basically the same notes with same melody just different words. In this clip I am singing just the first line of the chorus of Grenade in F#4. The notea are "I catch a gre(F#4) nade(G#4) for(E4) ya(C#4)" All in all I really appreciate any replies because right now I dont have money to get a vocal lesson so I do really appreciate all criticisms here since I feel in this forum there are people/singers that are well educated on the art/craft of singing. I have my own opinions on my voice but I would really appreciate the opinions and criticisms of other singers or a few vocal coaches that are here. Thanx to all who reply!:)

Damn has anybody checked this out??? This dude is one of my favorite vocalist but dang he sounded horrible here. Do you guys think its just some haters messing with the sound or its legit??? The performance seems to be the unedited version of Grenade that he does for Billboard. Its this one I believe. Pretty crazy.

I know its small but I would really appreciate if someone with a good ear would critic on it. I'll put up more later but this is what I have right now. It was recorded with a pretty old phone as you can tell the quality is sub par but thats the only thing I have that can record and be able to send it to my computer. I'm going for an R&B sound here as I love R&B. Later on I will be also posting some pieces from Folk songs like some of Eric Hutchinson's songs. Thanks to everybody that contributes. :)