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Here are the lyrics too in case you wanted to see them....your critiques would be very much appreciated. Many thanks, Mack Verse 1 Why don’t you draw on experiences, You never listen to what I say, Break down and tackle the issues we have, No need to question my way. Pre-chorus I go out, you stay in, You just shout, I can’t win, You go cold, I give in, Can’t seem to do no right. We have fire, but now war, I give love, you shut doors, You want this, I want more, And it ain’t worth fighting for. Chorus I gotta let you know now, I won’t change I gotta let you know now, No more scenes, I gotta let you know now, I got dreams, I gotta let you know now. Break it down. Verse 2 Why can’t you see that the better it is, The more I’m wanting stay, I’m only running to save us from this, You’re an enigma to me Pre-chorus I go out, you stay in, You just shout, I can’t win, You go cold, I give in, Can’t seem to do no right. We have fire, but now war, I give love, you shut doors, You want this, I want more, And it ain’t worth fighting for. Chorus I gotta let you know now, I won’t change I gotta let you know now, No more scenes, I gotta let you know now, I got dreams, I gotta let you know now. Break it down. Rap Chorus I gotta let you know now, I won’t change I gotta let you know now, No more scenes, I gotta let you know now, I got dreams, I gotta let you know now. Chorus I gotta let you know now, I won’t change I gotta let you know now, No more scenes, I gotta let you know now, I got dreams, I gotta let you know now. Break it down.

Hi all, I'm fairly new to this forum but have been listening to some of the really talented people on here so would really appreciate some of your valuable feedback. Gotta Let You Know is a song I wrote to a really cool Big Band sample I found, I have had a little help perfecting the production but the rest is all me. Would love to hear your thoughts on my voice and the song if you can spare a few moments, please be totally honest. I have had some feedback that I growl too much in the intro, I think this may be right so plan to re-record this and just let more of my natural rasp come out. Thank you very much for your time. Mack

Wow, you've had cancer and have come out the other side confident enough to sing, what an inspiration! You have a lovely tone but need to work on pitching and control, please keep going, until you can afford a vocal coach you might find it useful to download some singing tutorials like Brett Manning. Mack

You have a lovely soulful voice, really beautiful tone.

Hi Jatao, The link won't work for some reason? Mack