I like it, and you clearly have a really strong voice.
I'm probably not the best to give advice - very much a novice - but at times it feels like your bringing to much to the end of a sound and it almost begins to sound like a honking noise.
I don't have enough expertise to put it in technical terms but that's the only thing I'd criticise as it at times it sounds like its going very nasal.
I reiterate that I am no professional though and overall I did like the piece.
Alex
Hi, I'm a complete beginner who is just starting the Ken Tamplin volume 1.
Just wondered if anyone could give me any feedback on my vocals.
I'm going for a raspy, Ray Lamontagne, sort of feel.
Thanks in advance,
Alex