I liked it a lot guys! It sounded good, and you give me the sensation that it would be cool to hangout with you guys
Sylvia, the only thing I would advice is to revise your embouchure. That is the way you open your mouth when you sing You actually open it very little when singing, and you keep it very horizontal, not separating your teeth for more than half a centimeter, haha. This will rob you of resonant space. The AH's, like in "RIDE" for example.
I think you could sound a lot better and relaxed, and with more resonance also, if you tried to open your mouth in a more vertical way. Try to relax the jaw as much as you can and let it hang down, and move as needed. It is a very relaxed, "sleepy" song.. so you will benefit a lot from that! I hope I helped ( And that I explained myself well, I kind of just throw words as ideas come to my head, lol )
There are some awesome videos of Robert Lunte explaining embouchure! Be sure to watch them if you can