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Don't mind the piano playing and singing.. they both suck..   But i do need help at one thing. How to sound more powerful.  What I've tried in the above track is to gradually increase the little power i have at the end of each sentence. But i still sound so weak. Is that all there is to my voice or do you guys hear some points i can improve on that can enhance that sense of power?

1st of all thanks for your reply. Your tip about not using consonants seems so obvious.. still i never thought of it. Thanks for that! As for pitch... i'm not really aiming for pitch perfection.  A bit oftopic but talking of barbershop quartets.. i love this : 

Thanks for the extensive reaction   thanks     You never think you have a pitch issue until you start recording yourself. Most of the time i mess up pitch at moments that my voice loses energy or when i push too much... and when re-trying its hard for me to stay relaxed which also can affect pitch. Sometimes its also a certain sentence.. like the 1st one in this in the track above.. probably has to do with its vowel combinations "take it to the limit" (ae, i, oo, ae, i.i)... which somehow i cannot do correctly and therefore affects pitch AND energy. Maybe applying a different rhythm to the words can fix that.     Well when i said mix.. i was really talking about the mix of the voices.. like for instance volume 2nd voice vs 1st voice and 3rd. Or for instance voice vs music. The music itself needs much to be desired.. i really came to this forum to get some reference other than my own. I've been listening around in the "Review my singing" section. I'm here to stay and to learn for sure .   Funny. When i started singing the backing vocal parts.. i started with power.. and couldn't get it right until i tried it soft while breathing out a lot to keep the power constant. Thanks for the info and the link which back up my trial and error findings.      I did double track.. both breathy on the 1st sentence.. one breathy other more bite on 2nd sentence. I can hear what you say. Thanks for your reaction! Appreciated.

Hello people. I'm new here. I've been creating music for a long time now.. and its purely meant as a hobby. While making my last track i decided to fill some gaps in the outro with backing vocals. Beneath is part of an outro i'm creating for a song.  I'm most interested in critique on pitch, voice power, harmonies mix. Thanks in advance guys n galls. Since my voice isn't perfect for singing i rely on singing softly and breathing out as much as possible, i found out it's the only way to sound reasonably (at least for me). p.s. Dont mind my own comments pls.. the track is private and is uploaded so i can listen to it when im elsewhere.. i use the comment system it as a notebook for ideas.