Wow, you sound just like chester-you have a beautiful voice just like him. I really like it! On some parts, sing with a bit more aggression, more oomph. Like here- "what Ive done!"
when you start that line put more bam into it.Other parts, need to be more smoothed and less pressured- like at the end. I also did a chester tribute.. Here it is https://www.youtube.com/edit?o=U&video_id=475YtDvWoAg the synching isnt that great but it was hard to do! Im not a producer