Hello Jack,
This is a review my singing request, which I'm sure will be mentioned soon enough by a mod. That means you pay $10 for the members of this site (or at least the admin, Robert Lunte) to listen to your singing and give you feedback. This price is set in place so people don't show up to the forum, post a clip of their singing, and then leave after receiving feedback. In the end, you get what you put in, and you'll find that this site offers much to those who invest their interest in discourse and exchanges of information.
Welcome to TMV world.