free review needed a simple critic or something about my voice is enough, thanks! https://m.facebook.com/story.php?story_fbid=2693746947516231&id=100006428572758... by the way, it's a video I posted on Facebook, so yyyyeeeahhh.....
needs a bit more work.
overall, it's good.
that song doesn't really go well with your voice (yet) tho.. try singing Perfect or I See Fire by Ed Sheeran for now... or any kinda song like that (slow).
that's the best free advice I could give.