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One of my original songs - "Letters in the sand"

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jonpall
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Hi guys,

Here's a song I wrote and recorded a few years ago. It can be found here:

http://www.myspace.com/coma0210. Look for a song called "Letters in the sand".

I plan to re-arrange it into a slightly more rock version akin to perhaps Bruce Springsteen. Right now it's really an accoustic pop song with some drums and bass added in a hurry for the fun of it. It doesn't contain any vocal gymnastics, though. The top note is a G#4 and it's really just based on a simple melody and lyric idea. It would be cool to hear what some of you guys think of it.

Cheers!

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It works fine here. Jon... my critique is that I have no critique...

You sound every bit as good as any good pro singer out there - I love your approach here, it's just ... perfect !

Beautiful composition too, I'm really impressed.

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