One of my original songs - "Letters in the sand"

[jonpall]

Hi guys,

Here's a song I wrote and recorded a few years ago. It can be found here:

http://www.myspace.com/coma0210. Look for a song called "Letters in the sand".

I plan to re-arrange it into a slightly more rock version akin to perhaps Bruce Springsteen. Right now it's really an accoustic pop song with some drums and bass added in a hurry for the fun of it. It doesn't contain any vocal gymnastics, though. The top note is a G#4 and it's really just based on a simple melody and lyric idea. It would be cool to hear what some of you guys think of it.

Cheers!

[ronws]

It won't let me get pass the "download a new browser" page.

[jonpall]

Hmm, perhaps you're using an old Internet Explorer? Is anyone else having this problem?

[akarawd]

It works fine here. Jon... my critique is that I have no critique...

You sound every bit as good as any good pro singer out there - I love your approach here, it's just ... perfect !

Beautiful composition too, I'm really impressed.

[jonpall]

Thanks man! I appreciate it.

[Steven Fraser]

I enjoyed it, too!

[jonpall]

Thanks, Steven!