A song I wrote (my first post at the TMV Forums!)

[holyspiritninja]

Hello! First time poster here and newbie to TMV! Here is a song I wrote, I wanted to share it with you guys and I wouldn't mind some tips

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_7349039

Be Blessed, have a good day!

-Sergio

[ronws]

Absolutely well done, Sergio. Is this a song of faith? It certainly reads that way, without being "preachy," which is hard to do. I completely dig the transition at one point from a major to a diminished. Subtle and elegant. This is perfect songwriting. And I like the emotion you convey with your voice. Indie folk rock with a deeper meaning.

[holyspiritninja]

Thank you. And yes it is a "religious" song, or song of faith. It's my prayer to God asking Him to choose me and use me for His will and purpose. As far as it not being preachy... Haha I don't usually care if a song is, I just write what comes to mind

Thank you for the encouragement! I am working on an electric studio version of this song, I threw this acoustic demo out there so people could get a sneak preview of it. That is why its not "perfect," that is not what I was aiming for with this recording! but once again thank you so much! Any critiquing helps!