TMV World Legacy Member holyspiritninja Posted February 22, 2011 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 22, 2011 Hello! First time poster here and newbie to TMV! Here is a song I wrote, I wanted to share it with you guys and I wouldn't mind some tips http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_7349039 Be Blessed, have a good day! -Sergio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member ronws Posted February 22, 2011 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 22, 2011 Absolutely well done, Sergio. Is this a song of faith? It certainly reads that way, without being "preachy," which is hard to do. I completely dig the transition at one point from a major to a diminished. Subtle and elegant. This is perfect songwriting. And I like the emotion you convey with your voice. Indie folk rock with a deeper meaning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member holyspiritninja Posted February 22, 2011 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 22, 2011 Thank you. And yes it is a "religious" song, or song of faith. It's my prayer to God asking Him to choose me and use me for His will and purpose. As far as it not being preachy... Haha I don't usually care if a song is, I just write what comes to mind Thank you for the encouragement! I am working on an electric studio version of this song, I threw this acoustic demo out there so people could get a sneak preview of it. That is why its not "perfect," that is not what I was aiming for with this recording! but once again thank you so much! Any critiquing helps! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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