Loosing the raspyness for a more cleaner tone

[cr4nk]

Hi,

I have posted here previously and have received many great tips about my singing. As I mention in the older post I have lost the interest in raspy singing because I can't sing for long before my throat gets sore and after a while I start to loose my voice.

Anyways I have recorded an original song with my clean singing voice. I need your opinion of what you think of my singing.

The song is called "Chief Extreme" and can be found here: http://www.reverbnation.com/cr4nk

Thank you.

[jonpall]

Sounds cool. But could you do it again with rasp?

Just kidding. I actually think that because of the f$#%&k you attitude you have in your voice in that song, you don't really need rasp at all. I liked your singing there. It had a punky feeling to it.