All I wanted by Paramore, 4 semitones lowered male cover

[Asaoka]

Hi there,

Ive been singing recently, so there are still tons of things for me to improve and work on (vocals, pitch etc)

Here is my cover of Paramore`s ALl i wanted

http://webfile.ru/5451282

The recording`s quality is average, so its suggested to listen using headphones to hear the voice timbre better.

Wanna hear you suggestion and critics. I know its difficult to say what kind of voice i have (Tenor or baritone) by listening this short cover, but maybe anyone can tell hes\her opinions about it.

Thank in advance

Sorry for my bad english.

P.S. Im 19 right now : ) I know my piano skills are lame, and i messed up with rythm a lil bit

Lyrics

Think of me when you're out, when you're out there

I'll beg you nice from my knees

And when the world treats you way too fairly

Well it's a shame, I'm a dream

All I wanted was you

All I wanted was you

I think I'll pace my apartment a few times

And fall asleep on the couch

And wake up early to black and white reruns

That escape from my mouth

All I wanted was you

All I wanted was you

All I wanted was you

All I wanted was you

[ronws]

All I wanted was you. Modify the oo vowel to aw. Trying to say oo as you would speak was making you flat, just a little. Otherwise, a pretty good version. English is a hard language to speak or sing. The word "runs" the s should sound like a z or a buzzy sound. But, in english the word "expanse" would have the hard s that you use in your speach. English makes no sense. I was born speaking English and it still doesn't make sense, to me. So, no big deal.

[Oliver]

You got a clear voice, I'd like that too. But also an accent. Keep practicing good luck.