Newbie singer asks for a honest opinion

[RFlaxfield]

It's been a few month since I last posted a track to be reviewed, so maybe I'm not really newbie anymore. (But I sing less than a year, so I consider that still to be newbie)

So....did I improve?

http://soundcloud.com/richard-flaxfield/body-and-soul

[Jugulator]

That's great, man! You're not a newbie, noo Pay attention to higher notes to make them more supported.

[RFlaxfield]

Hey Jugulator, thank you for your comment. I know exactly what you mean, and I'll be working on that. Give me couple of months, and I'll be back at ye.

[rofleren]

You're back, and even better this time! I just listened to it 6-7 times in a row and put it on my iPod. That's a compliment :D

[ronws]

I didn't hear your first submission so I have no comparison for improvement. But I really liked this. I have an original ceramic pressing of Billy Holiday (for you young'ns, that's a phonograph, before they started using plastic. And this reminds me of that. In fact, totally spot on for keeping that phonograph hiss. That makes it real. In fact, I think any one should really hear the Billy Holiday recording to effectively judge yours. But that's just my aesthetic. I think there will always be a place for torch song singing.

[RFlaxfield]

Hey rofleren and ronws,

To be compared to Billie Holiday AND to be put on someones iPod IS a big compliment

Than why can't I find any accompanying musicians?

Oh well, I won't give up.