Trying to sing Rainbow in the dark

[scorpione]

Ok so finally I've stopped shouting. It was quite easy to sing that part but I think it could sound much better. It still misses something.

Also, I've found that vowels are very important, much more that I thought before singing this song

Advice and critic please

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[Keith]

Hard to tell the difference between RJD and you sometimes.. I have tha karaoke track - so send me your email if you want it. From what I could discern, it sounded pretty da,m good though.

[ronws]

Well done, Scorpione. You have the right tonality for this song, compared to the original.

I don't, which doesn't stop me from singing it. I sing songs I like but you really have the right "thing" for this song.

[Snax]

Great job!!! Love your grit and overall tone. :)

[Chavie]

Very good job man!!!

id love to hear this with keiths backing track, as said, you have the voice for it.

[Olem]

That sounded awesome, Scorpione, i would love to hear you sing the whole song with a backing track.