devaitis Posted January 13, 2012 Share Posted January 13, 2012 Hi guys. I'm preparing to record this song with backing track, but before that I want to hear critique on this. I used ambience mic to record this one. I think my voice is more clear without processing, so it is easier to catch mistakes. Thanks for help. http://www.box.com/s/yj4vj1om9o5txr3c22ym Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olem Posted January 13, 2012 Share Posted January 13, 2012 Very nice mixed voice, Devaitis, your vocals sounded very commercial. Watch out for the word "love", you pronounce this word wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quincy Posted January 13, 2012 Share Posted January 13, 2012 I liked hearing this intensity from you. It's a little tight in spots but as you get use to it I think it will open up more and sound even more powerful and intense. Really good! Definitely on the right track. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devaitis Posted January 14, 2012 Author Share Posted January 14, 2012 thank you for help, then I can see how much work is waiting for me to do. Maybe I will never be able to sing like Gramm, Perry or Jamison but I have a lot of happiness with this challenge. Thank you for your time and willing to help. Special greeting for all of you classic rock singers, I see metal vocalists are majority here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keith Posted January 14, 2012 Share Posted January 14, 2012 Nice job man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ronws Posted January 14, 2012 Share Posted January 14, 2012 Sounds good, Devaitis. Especially toward the end, you sounded more confident which seemed to give the notes more power. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devaitis Posted January 14, 2012 Author Share Posted January 14, 2012 Thank for replies. I think each of you guys want to say one thing. This singing is not enough powerful that it should be, is it? I am sure it is the key - more full and confident sound. thank you once again for help Hi stew503 I am really glad for you time and willing to help me in this extra way. So what do you want me to do Sir? I can both tell you what I see in my mirror reflection or make a cam video me singing. dev Stew I can't mail you. I am from Poland. 1) Constant /s/ I usually pronounce /s/ like in my language which is more frontal then English one, top of the tongue touches a place close to teeth. Differences between Polish /s/ (marked as red color) and English /s/ (original) http://www.box.com/s/9hg88rz5ac7zjfoqm1gx 2) Constant /th/ We have not equivalent in Polish, so i ALWAYS try my best to imitate original English phonetic sound, but in the mirror I noticed I pulled out tongue more then it should be done. Peak of my tongue touches edge of teeth, it isn't completely hide. Differences analogous: Red - what I'm doing http://www.box.com/s/2ls1kg8o059f98ezyfas And I hope it is clear. dev Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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