TMV World Legacy Member nightfly68 Posted March 29, 2012 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 29, 2012 One of the classc tracks in my playlist http://snd.sc/H3uwjU Hope you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Guest Posted March 29, 2012 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 29, 2012 That was pretty cool. Although it sounded a little eerie to me You changed the melody of the vocals a little bit and it gave it kind of a spooky sound. Which I found interesting...not a bad thing. If I had to say something as a critique, I would say the English. I guess English is a second language so some of the lyrics were wrong Also some of the words were long and drawn out, which at least for me, kind of confused the sentence structure. The word "feeling" comes to mind. There was the word "is" somewhere in there also that was emphasized. I forget where it was but it was the wrong word to emphasize in a sentence. Overall, good job Tommy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member nightfly68 Posted March 29, 2012 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 29, 2012 thank a lot... for your comment. Sure English not only is a second language for me.. but it's some years I don't use it frequantly as in the past. Thanks again.. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Mr_pink_77_it Posted March 29, 2012 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 29, 2012 Great cover nightfly!! You are amazing :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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