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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nRgNiRsmgW8

wrote it about 10 minutes ago in 5 minutes. The recording is just the 1st take and I couldnt see the screen cause glare so the verse sounding part is mumbled a little bit. Im more looking to see feedback on the hook and if you even like my voice? Is there a point in spending time on writing a song? would it be good?

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The tune is very catchy, and very radio friendly.

Never heard of anyone playing guitar and rapping at the same time lol. good sense of rhythm.

Maybe a little more support in places, but i cant criticize much.

Always nice to hear originals on here :)

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Thanks for the feedback. I just did a first take run to remember how it went, then posted just for fun to see if people actually liked it. If i recorded it better do you think it could sound good? Was my singing "good"?

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