amatuer Posted August 30, 2012 Share Posted August 30, 2012 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nRgNiRsmgW8 wrote it about 10 minutes ago in 5 minutes. The recording is just the 1st take and I couldnt see the screen cause glare so the verse sounding part is mumbled a little bit. Im more looking to see feedback on the hook and if you even like my voice? Is there a point in spending time on writing a song? would it be good? Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chavie Posted August 30, 2012 Share Posted August 30, 2012 The tune is very catchy, and very radio friendly. Never heard of anyone playing guitar and rapping at the same time lol. good sense of rhythm. Maybe a little more support in places, but i cant criticize much. Always nice to hear originals on here :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keith Posted August 30, 2012 Share Posted August 30, 2012 Yeah, very catchy! And, it depends on the song you are writing. Some people can write in 5 minutes a song that kicks a*s - others (like myself) can't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amatuer Posted August 30, 2012 Author Share Posted August 30, 2012 Thanks for the feedback. I just did a first take run to remember how it went, then posted just for fun to see if people actually liked it. If i recorded it better do you think it could sound good? Was my singing "good"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chavie Posted August 30, 2012 Share Posted August 30, 2012 Singing was fine, just polish it up a bit and you will be fine :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keith Posted August 30, 2012 Share Posted August 30, 2012 You sound like you should at your age. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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