Metallica - unforgiven 3 Critique My Singing thanks

[ozsel]

hello guys

im a newbie singer can u help me to improve my singing , i know there are many timing problems around

i recorded with sm57

thanks

[ozsel]

any opinion ?

and i covered iron maiden hallowed be thy name but soundcloud didnt let me upload and share - said its copyrighted etc how can i share with you ?

thanks