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New attempt after some work....please critique.....Thank you!


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My second attempt after a few months. Looking for honest critique. I did this E flat which, to me, sounds like it fits my voice better. I read on the internet that e flat suits a lot of male singers that do no have a strong voice? My goal is to sing maybe at an open mic one of these days and not embarrass myself. Am I on key? out of pitch? Are people going to throw tomatoes at me? I've worked up the courage to sing in front of a couple of family members and they say "not bad".....Probably not the best way to get an honest eval. Anyway, all comments are welcome.

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Hey Bluesguy63!

You have most definitely potential, but in my (not professional) opinion, it lacks technique. Some vocal training will fix that.

Good luck bro!

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This song is too close to speaking to begin with. It is lower than people think and when we try to sing too low we tend to sing flat. Like Gilad said ther is potential there. Can you post another song that is less like telling a story?

"You need a strong foundation to reach the heights."

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