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Quick excerpt of a song I learned today: Bastille - Flaws

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First verse, prechorus, chorus.

Had to squint at lyrics on a tiny screen while playing and singing... yadda yadda excuses.

I think I'm spreading a bit too much sometimes and the sound comes too forward. Creeping tightened lips for the loss. :( I believe that as I gain familiarity with the lyrics, I can free it up even more.

http://snd.sc/WJ1xcL

How does it sound to y'all?

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I think the new and improved is just that, improved. Your expression for this song, the vocal line, in my book, sounds more cohesive and solid. Your diction is more natural and flows better, improving the timing and your legato. I'd say keep doing what you are doing.

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