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up in the sky(original song)

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mr-leonor99
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wow 17 or so views, no comments...

Anyway, I'll state that I think you have great tone.. You need to support more to project better.. sounds too "sleepy" .. but if you project better you can make it interesting and exciting...

You have a nice tone for this type of song..

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Sorry I missed this earlier. This is worth putting time into. It sounds like you are not confident with this yet. Like you are still working on it. If you haven't yet. Work on this like you would any song from another artist. Write the words down the way they are now and go over the parts one verse at a time. That way it will not keep changing every time you sing it.

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