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A chorus and verse I put together, tell me how it sounds

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amatuer
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It was just 2 quick takes because I just want to know if I am singing/rapping correctly. If you could give me a 1-10 rating that would be nice, and any tips and advice are greatly appreciated.

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Well, 5 likes and 0 dislikes on youtube...:)

It's good. You could maybe tighten up the timing of the vocals a tiny bit during the singing part, but it's still good as is. The rapping's very good. The composition is fantastic.

I'd give you a 8 or 9 out of 10 on the overall product.

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Open your sound more when singing -- project it forward more (less airy)...

Rapping is good.... When you say " Back in the day I use to be on MYYYYY own... .".. the MYYYYY gets disconnected... keep a flow or add a vibrato to it...

But those are just tidbits, you did a good job on it's own.

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