TMV World Legacy Member amatuer Posted June 11, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted June 11, 2013 It was just 2 quick takes because I just want to know if I am singing/rapping correctly. If you could give me a 1-10 rating that would be nice, and any tips and advice are greatly appreciated. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Owen Korzec Posted June 11, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted June 11, 2013 Well, 5 likes and 0 dislikes on youtube... It's good. You could maybe tighten up the timing of the vocals a tiny bit during the singing part, but it's still good as is. The rapping's very good. The composition is fantastic. I'd give you a 8 or 9 out of 10 on the overall product. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member amatuer Posted June 11, 2013 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted June 11, 2013 Thanks man. Any areas I need vast improvement on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Owen Korzec Posted June 11, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted June 11, 2013 Thanks man. Any areas I need vast improvement on? Nope, not that I can hear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Onacor Posted June 12, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted June 12, 2013 Open your sound more when singing -- project it forward more (less airy)... Rapping is good.... When you say " Back in the day I use to be on MYYYYY own... .".. the MYYYYY gets disconnected... keep a flow or add a vibrato to it... But those are just tidbits, you did a good job on it's own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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