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  • TMV World Legacy Member
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I rarely listen to the original song, but my friend ask me to do cover for this song. Hopefully can get constructive critique from you guys. Thanks. :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3FZWI4qRFY4

  • TMV World Legacy Member
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Sounds good overall.

Vocal could be louder in the mix.

Your timing and phrasing could use a little work but it's not bad, it could be easily fixed by singing along to the original more.

At times you sounded too nasal/masky/pharyngeal/over-twanged (whatever terminology you identify with). Watch out for that. A darker sound would be preferable, something more "open throat", slightly more like a yawn but not too much.

Your pitch is great.

Hope that helps.

  • TMV World Legacy Member
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Thanks Owen, you always give helpful and constructive critique. :)

  • TMV World Legacy Member
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Sounds pretty good. Some pitchy spots here and there. The overall feeling is there, but the phrasing needs some work.

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