New Member looking for some constructive feedback :)

[RobLomax]

Hey!

I'm new to the site and have spent a couple minutes jumping around the threads here. This section seemed cool so I wanted to share a clip of a performance to hear what you guys think? Not my best performance I feel, but it did the job it was intended for. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated, as I am looking to develop myself as an artist.

Hit me!

All the best,

Robin

[Keith]

I thought it was great man. You sang with heart, great pitch, and great control.

[ronws]

I agree with Keith. The singing and the tone was good. And at least you got the interest of two of the mentors. Some of the contestants never get even one.

[Chavie]

Great voice, Good phrasing... Awesome job man.

[MDEW]

Pretty Cool Rob. I liked the head bobbing you were doing on the show. :cool:

I listened to Blackbird on your youtube channel also. Very nice.

[Felipe Carvalho]

Hey Rob I think it sounds good man. Very nice and catchy interpretation, all down to earth without non-sense and exaggerations, really good to listen to.

In my opinion you are coming a bit too strong on the way you focus your voice, it does sound VERY cool but maybe you could make it more valuable if you used a smaller amount on the overall, on some points its taking away the attention, specially on the lower notes before a higher spot the change gets a bit evident. Something that of course you should work with your coach.

Great Job, send more man.