TMV World Legacy Member Snejk Posted January 24, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 24, 2014 What do you guys think? I kinda like the intro idea (albeit not the midi sound xD). Singing wise I will adjust things like making a cleaner lead line and more coherent harmonies. https://soundcloud.com/archdementh/najtm-rs-in-da-works Best regards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benny82 Posted January 30, 2014 Share Posted January 30, 2014 Very cool, love the groove and the atmospheric vocals. I can imagine the intro to sound awesome with real instruments ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Snejk Posted January 31, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 31, 2014 Thanks for the input. Yeah agree, real instruments would be preferable.. Now I just need to find someone who plays the cello and the ocarina xDDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benny82 Posted January 31, 2014 Share Posted January 31, 2014 Thanks for the input. Yeah agree, real instruments would be preferable.. Now I just need to find someone who plays the cello and the ocarina xDDD Yeah, finding those is really awful. We're looking for someone to play a Cello or Violin (hell, even keys would be a good start) basically since the beginning of our band (which was over 1.5 years ago). 90% of those guys just want to play classical stuff :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Snejk Posted February 1, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 1, 2014 Woah, toughie indeed. I have seen like, eh, TWO heavy metal celloists (cellis?).. Both belonging to Apocalyptica xD Good luck to ya :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member ronws Posted February 1, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 1, 2014 Sorry it took me so long to reply, Patrick. I have been busy lately. Work, personal life stuff, etc. I like this song idea and I would keep the basic construction you have so far. Maybe punch up the guitar sound a little to be LESS refined. This is a blues song, as far as I can hear and needs to be not so pretty. Let your voice be the only pretty thing in it. This will go well with the juxtaposition of light and dark that is in the song, already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Keith Posted February 1, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 1, 2014 I like it. Cool stuff. Careful about adding too much effects to your voice - it gets a little washed out in places. www.drop-head.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Snejk Posted February 2, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 2, 2014 Thanks for the feedback Ron you can always shout me a mail if you wanna talk, you know that right? Think is, I like "pretty" :> That's why I'm such a fan of Power Metal (aka princess flower pop schlager metal) So the guitars are not too gritty, but still not surf guitars :> The song in it's entirety will be a very evolved version of this but I will keep the bridge (I loof the harmonies <3) " They creep, under your skin. Fast asleep, they play their games, deep within. just a bite, every single night slowly they bleed you out, wear you thin as dawn betrays you it's lights grow ever dim... .. "and they're gone, they chose to leave me" ridden of a sunrise, a day can never be senseless and forever - welcome to your unreality Chorus - Withering of mind, feel as your fall Weary, hollow eyes gone cold Bitter and denied, endless the stall Leering in behind, eyelids turned mold" Something like that... Thanks Keith, you are spot on; I can't mix at all (I think I've said those words more than my amount of posts on these boards xD) but I always like to put up "rough sketches" since I'm so anxious for feedback in case something is just horribly out of place and needs to go before continuing. The final product will be mixed by my friend who plays the guitar and bass - He actually knows what he's doing unlike moi I do admit to being a delay and reverb whore but when you just stack the same 4th note medium delay on 20 tracks it all blurs into a mess :/ I wish my ear could tell me that WHEN I attempt mixing.. But I guess it's because I know the phrases, the words etc so I hear it all clear because it's already in my head 'dry' ; Any mixing tips are always appreciated, I know you are good at it Keith, I think you mixed.. Was it Still Loving You, Tallulah or Letter To Dana for me? :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Keith Posted February 2, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 2, 2014 Prolly lol www.drop-head.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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