Let Her Go Acoustic Cover

[RHan]

Please give me critique on this cover, thank you.

http://soundcloud.com/rh4n/let-her-go-acoustic-cover

[AmirMaor]

beautiful , you can improve the final mix i think. sound great.

[RHan]

Thanks sir for the feedback, btw i love your song 'all she said'. i can feel the emotion from your song :)

[Jim Brewster]

You have a nice voice! :)

[ronws]

I liked it.

A few places you went flat trying to make the american "i" sound. Move that back to "ah." I did the same thing to myself today, singing a song that had the word "love" in it, which we usually speak as an "uh." I corrected myself mid-stream to an ah sound and it tuned itself up. Yes, I still make this basic mis-steps, which helps me appreciate what you are going through.

But I like the song and I like the melancholy sound that you have in it.

[RHan]

You have a nice voice!

Thanks Jim for the encouragement! :)

[RHan]

I liked it.

A few places you went flat trying to make the american "i" sound. Move that back to "ah." I did the same thing to myself today, singing a song that had the word "love" in it, which we usually speak as an "uh." I corrected myself mid-stream to an ah sound and it tuned itself up. Yes, I still make this basic mis-steps, which helps me appreciate what you are going through.

But I like the song and I like the melancholy sound that you have in it.

Thanks mr. ronws for the feedback! Can you help to pinpoint the places that i made that mistake? Is it at the chorus?