Ellie Goulding - Burn and Explosions Cover (Would like some feedback)

[Imagine!]

Hello everyone!

I would like some honest feedback for two covers i recently did. I know for sure I need to work on strengthening my lower range, and it's a work in progress! Anyways, tell me what you think.

Sometimes I wish I could just sing chorus parts of songs, or that the verses were higher..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LHgrGJ3ZDtg

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V8w48TBpMrY

[Imagine!]

Would still like some feedback c':

[Lavishous]

Seems like you're rushing the beat a bit in the choruses but not a huge issue. I personally think your voice sounds a lot like Ellie's with a light, airy tone that worked especially well in the higher "When the light started out" parts. I agree that there is some work to be done in the low end but that should come with time and deeper, supported breaths. Hope this helped!

[MrSomber]

In the verse there are times where you sound off-pitch. Specifically, you're usually flat. The chorus part is pretty good though but the pitch gets inconsistent again when you sing words with a lot of syllables quickly.