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Unchanged, An Upbeat Original

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Hi David, did you just write this song? Good job! It is a feeling good type of song. I liked the melody but I found it too repetitive for my taste (IMO). On a quick listen I could not identify a chorus or a change in the dynamics. As another songwriter/guitarplayer who is working on the vocal technique, I was wondering if this is your style or if you just feel a bit limited vocally. Because it happened to me. I got a bunch of old songs (more than 10 yrs old) that are giving me a hard time to improve vocally, while I believe the new songs will be so much easier because I´m learning the techniques to sing the melodies I want. Anyways, I liked overall, just missed changes in the dynamics. Keep on rocking!

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