Wish you were here - Pink Floyd - Need feedback

[donduck12]

Hey,what do you think about this ,does it sound well?Be honest to me.Btw i was playing the guitar too so i was not 100 % focused on singing ,I should also mention that I'm 16 and that I started singing month ago.Does it sound like a tenor,baritone ?Thanks in advance and sorry for the quality,it's not the best

https://soundcloud.com/someonesomewhere123/wish-you-were-here-pink-floyd

[ronws]

Doesn't matter if you are baritone or tenor.

Simplify your vowels, which is an articulation preference of mine. It sounded like you made "hell" two syllables with too much time on the ll sound. Make it h -eh- l

On the up side, I like your emotional presentation. I think you carried the spirit of the song. And yes, this song can be a challenge to play and sing at the same time. In my version, I simplified the arrangement because I was also playing on one guitar.

[donduck12]

Thanks,will practice it,someone else ?

[David]

you sound like a baritone.

[donduck12]

Does anyone think this sounds well ?I'm really not confident in myself,so just tell me do I suck or it somehow sounds well,It would mean alot ,both of these answers :rolleyes:

[analog]

you've got the materials so build

[gno]

Sounds good. You've got the rhythm and phrasing down which is a big part of singing.

[MDEW]

Sounds good to me. I like the tone of your voice and you were very expressive. :)