donduck12 Posted August 17, 2014 Share Posted August 17, 2014 Hey,I just recorded this,I should say that I'm 16 and recording with my phone.What do you think ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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MarWhite1995 Posted August 18, 2014 Share Posted August 18, 2014 You have a wonderful gravel to your voice. The song suits your tone, however, the chorus sounds a bit forced, I think you should relax into it. I hear some straining in the chorus, but maybe that is the gravel-like sound you wanted us to hear? Nonetheless, its an okay cover, you have a good voice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ronws Posted August 19, 2014 Share Posted August 19, 2014 Sounds good and it sounds like you are singing a different, lower line for the chorus. Were you changing the arrangement on purpose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SLM Posted August 19, 2014 Share Posted August 19, 2014 Watch how you are shaping your vowels in the chorus. Vowels are getting wide and splatty, this is contributing to the tension in your voice in the chorus. I believe if you fix the way you shape your vowels it will help your singing develop very quickly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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