Did I sing on pitch this time? Dream On- Aerosmith

[IamHo]

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0l9sJHdzv4B

link above is me singing Dream On by Aerosmith. I've posted this before and I sang too terribly. Hope to get some critiques again! Thanks.

Did I sing on pitch this time? And at the final phrase the insanely note after "dream on" is "ahhhhhahahah" sometimes I can sustain it till the end but sometimes I can't. Why is that?

[BBlade]

Sorry dude, but you sang out of key 60% of the time. I truly believe the quality of your voice isn't bad, but you just have trouble singing the "right" notes. One thing I would do is work on training your ear, and match pitch on sustained notes. Honestly, some people just "know" how to match pitches and sing on key, because it sounds "right". I think this comes from being exposed to a lot of music at a young age.

But don't fret, try working with a partner that sings really well and has a good musical ear. He or she can sustain a note by singing, and you can attempt to try singing it with them. After that, ask them if you were matching the pitch or not This will help practice you "ear," allow you to know your voice better, and get you to develop a mental connection to sounds (being able to hear a pitch and exactly match it the first time).

[Felipe Carvalho]

Well its not sounding good man.

A lot of things are indeed out of pitch, but still some are on pitch so you are getting to match it depending on what is going on, you are having trouble to identify the intervals.

Take a song that is more simple for you, and try nailing down one phrase at a time, maybe using an instrument to help you. GL!

[SLM]

you are also under-energized which most definitely contributes to being flat most of the time. Try singing it with more authority in your voice and i'm sure you will match more of the pitches