Review My Singing Membership bluesguy63 Posted November 16, 2014 Review My Singing Membership Posted November 16, 2014 My first attempt at song writing....comments/critique appreciated.
TMV World Legacy Member Marcus Posted November 18, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Posted November 18, 2014 I like the song, sets a nice mood. I like the guitar and melody. There were a few pitchy notes on the vocals, mainly by the end of the song I think. Shouldn't be any trouble to fix, just go over it a few times and really know where the melody will go. Sometimes I got the feeling the melody was very low for you, but could be related to recording volume as well. I'm gonna assume it's recorded live with one microphone or device like a phone. The vocals are low in volume compared to the guitar. So much that I have a hard time hearing the lyrics in some parts. Could the mic be moved closer to your mouth when recording?
Review My Singing Membership bluesguy63 Posted November 18, 2014 Author Review My Singing Membership Posted November 18, 2014 Thanks Marcus...
Review My Singing Membership bluesguy63 Posted November 27, 2014 Author Review My Singing Membership Posted November 27, 2014 Any other thoughts? Happy Thanks giving....
TMV World Legacy Member Bono Posted November 27, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Posted November 27, 2014 Hi Bluesguy, i like your song...! though, I hear you a little unconfortable with the key of the song, why dont you try to sing it a half or a whole step higher, i think it will make a difference, also you´ll be able to sing it louder Please, review and critique my latest post: Donny Hathaway - A song for yousouncloud: https://soundcloud.com/matias-azar-1
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