TMV World Legacy Member Mr_pink_77_it Posted December 28, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted December 28, 2014 A tribute to the great Lucio Dalla and to the voice of Enrico Caruso! For the first time I sang in my mother language :-) 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member KillerKu Posted December 28, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted December 28, 2014 Thanks for posting a native language piece in a different style. I don't have enough exposure to the language, style, or technical knowledge to give a proper critique as to how to improve it in any way (if it's possible), but it's a breath of fresh air and beautiful to hear. Maybe some more worldly members would have better skills there. I wanted you to know it was listened to twice and I could feel it. It sounds passionate and it sounds good. This world wide forum could be an incredibly beautiful and informative experience. Thank you for contributing very much. People like me need to hear your the passions that inspire you whether we understand your language or not. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrator Robert Lunte Posted December 28, 2014 Administrator Share Posted December 28, 2014 Nice. Yes, its nice to see some broad genre's in here. Thanks for sharing.... Im curious, did you try the Italian translator on our system? See the top right corner... ROBERT LUNTE Founder / Author / Coach robert@thevocaliststudio.com TheVocalistStudio Student Testimonials Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member ronws Posted December 28, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted December 28, 2014 I liked it and certainly a style (torch song) that not many people follow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Mr_pink_77_it Posted December 28, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted December 28, 2014 Thanks for posting a native language piece in a different style. I don't have enough exposure to the language, style, or technical knowledge to give a proper critique as to how to improve it in any way (if it's possible), but it's a breath of fresh air and beautiful to hear. Maybe some more worldly members would have better skills there. I wanted you to know it was listened to twice and I could feel it. It sounds passionate and it sounds good. This world wide forum could be an incredibly beautiful and informative experience. Thank you for contributing very much. People like me need to hear your the passions that inspire you whether we understand your language or not. I'm really honoured for your comment KillerKu!!! I found a little translation of the song in english Caruso Here where the sea shines and the wind is strong on an old terrace infront of the Gulf of Sorriento(province of Naples if I'm not mistaken) a man hugs a girl after he has cried Afterwards he clears his voice and begins again to sing I care too much for u(Te voglio bene assaje) but, u know, a great deal at his point it has become a chain(e' una catena ormai) that melts the blood in the * veins u know He saw the lights in the middle of the sea he thought of the nights in America** but they where only the lights from the boats*** and the white trace of a propeller He felt the pain of music got up from the piano But when he saw the moon that was coming out from behind a cloud he thought that even death was sweeter He looked into the eyes of the girl those eyes green like the sea then suddenly a tear came out and he believed he was soffocating I care too much for u(Te voglio bene assaje) but, u know, a great deal at his point it has become a chain(e' una catena ormai) that melts the blood in the veins u know Force of the lirica where**** every drama is a false(ogni drama e' un falso) which with a little bit of make-up(che con un po' di trucco) and with the art of mimic u can become someone else but 2 eyes that are watching u(ma due occhi che di guardano) so close and different(eyes of different people)(cosi' vicini e vari) they make you forget the words(ti fan scordare le parole) i get mixed up so everything becomes small even the nights there in America u turn and see your own life(ti volti e vedi la tua vita) like the trace of a propeller but its the life that ends But he didn't think that much the opposite he was feeling already happy and started again to sing I care too much for u(Te voglio bene assaje) but, u know, a great deal at his point it has become a chain(e' una catena ormai) that melts the blood in the veins u know *some words are in naples's dialect **America=USA not the continent ***lampare r boats for fishing in the evening ****lirica=something between theater and opera Taken from http://lyricstranslate.com/en/node/68187#ixzz3NDNCdzu2 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Caruso_(song) Thank you again for your beautiful comment :-) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Mr_pink_77_it Posted December 28, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted December 28, 2014 Nice. Yes, its nice to see some broad genre's in here. Thanks for sharing.... Im curious, did you try the Italian translator on our system? See the top right corner... Thank you so much Robert!!! Grazie mille :-) The translator works well from English to Italian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Mr_pink_77_it Posted December 28, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted December 28, 2014 Wow, great choice! I love, love, love this song! Nice work on the singing. You do thin out a bit on the higher notes. Maybe dropping the key a little might help? Also, some reverb would fatten the tone up a little bit. This is my favorite version, by the beautiful Lara Fabian: Thank you so much I love Lara!! But perhaps this version is even better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Mr_pink_77_it Posted December 28, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted December 28, 2014 I liked it and certainly a style (torch song) that not many people follow. Thank you ronws Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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