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  • TMV World Legacy Member
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I imagine you have sang it a few times before today. :lol:

I liked it but a word of advice on mixing. There is a lot of hiss on the vocal track. You might want to put a noise removal on that or a gate

One other tip. On pronunciation. Gorky Park. The g is hard, almost like a k. And the k is hard, too. That is, if you listen to how Klaus is singing it, that is the correct pronunciation, regardless of how it is spelled. I can't remember the original spelling and the last time I spent any time with the cyrillic alphabet was back in the late 80's.

 

  • TMV World Legacy Member
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I recognise your voice so much! That's both a call to remind me and meant as a compliment. Your voice is very special and I really like your phrasing.
 

  • TMV World Legacy Member
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Enander, thank you so much, that means alot to me.

Rowns, thank you for the tips! I'll try noise gating the vocal track. And the pronunciation, I have a habit of being too lazy with it sometimes, although sometimes it can be kind of stylistic thing. I will definitely work on this, as well as the words you mentioned :)

My own critique, I think I sound kind of lazy and as if I'm having a cold, which I was not! A lot to do with the pronunciation I think, but I can't quite put my finger on what else it's about. Right now I'm quite focused on vowel sounds, throat shape, mixing into headvoice low in the passagio and so on. I want to take things slow anyway, let it grow.. Can you comment on this?

"My music at www.ozzyslant.com"

  • TMV World Legacy Member
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Good job Ozzy! Nice voice man. Yeah, Ronws is right about the pronunciation of Gorky Park. Hey Ozzy I think I get the feeling of laid back singing you were referring to, it isn't a bad thing just style. I liked your cover, although I thought the voice could have been a bit stronger/beefier for my taste. Keep on rocking man!

  • TMV World Legacy Member
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Gneetapp thank you! And it will get beefier, I'm just taking my time with it :) I want to maintain this headvoice development as I start to introduce more and more chest to my voice and not overdo it, if that makes sense.

"My music at www.ozzyslant.com"

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