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My First Music Forum And Song And Lyrics And Clip :)

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AmirMaor
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Hi,

My name is Amir from Tel-Aviv and I LOVE music!

I'm here to here your opinion about my music (good and bad) and hope to learn from it.

Here is my new song (and clip).

hope you like it :)

Lyrics:

All she said you and me

All she said meant to be

All she gave me reason to bealive

When she said she will never live

Where are you now

What are you doing to me

Where are you now

All she said hold me tiet

When we stay up all night

All she said trust in me

All I have Is what she said to me

Where are you now

What are you doing to me

Where are you now

The wind you feel I feel it to

The sky you see Is not just for you

We are on the same road Don't turn your head away

Maybe some day....

Where are you now

What are you doing to me

Where are you now

song:

Tnx

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Its an easy listening tune. Personally i dont like eastern sounding melodies but its very good! The chorus part is quite catchy. The lyrics could be improved maybe a bit, and also your accent, its not bad but it can get better.

My personal opinion, thats a very nice song. Didnt watch the videoclip, but the song is really good! Kind of you to put the lyrics here.

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Tnx for the comment "Singingnewbie".

I know I have some accent, that one of the reason i'm here.

I want that native English speaker will listen and see if the accent is that bad because I can't tell.

Two bad you didn't saw the videoclip, but the song is more important :)

Tnx again

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